Tom held his breath and opened his birthday present. He wanted to get those Nike Mercurial Superfly football boots.
Cristiano Ronaldo, Didier Drogba, Theo Walcott and Alexandre Pato all wore Superfly.
Tom tearing off the wrapping paper, revealed a shoe box. His heart beat accerlated. He lifted the lid. It was a Nike Mercurial Superfly.
Cristiano Ronaldo, Didier Drogba, Theo Walcott and Alexandre Pato all wore Superfly.
Tom tearing off the wrapping paper, revealed a shoe box. His heart beat accerlated. He lifted the lid. It was a Nike Mercurial Superfly.
This track/running theme seems to keep emerging in your writing. I can't understand why...unless you're involved in track.
ReplyDeleteI know you are serious about your running, but I would have ended this with something like. "And next year he hoped to get the other one." After all it was "a" NMS.
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